Word count: 283
Personal comments: I would give this essay an overall rating (0-4) of about a 2. I feel it would be acceptable as a GED essay, but the conclusion could be stronger.
Topic: Think of something you really enjoy doing. In an essay of about 200 -250 words, explain why you enjoy this activity and how you benefited from it. Be sure to give specific examples and reasons.
Introduction: Blogging, web design, sewing, and cooking are all activities I enjoy doing, but if I had to choose one of my favorites it would be cooking. I enjoy cooking for several reasons. I find it relaxing, delicious, and entertaining! In this essay I will be sharing with you the joys and benefits of cooking. So sit back, grab a great cup of coffee and enjoy!
Conclusion: In conclusion, if you have some spare time, try cooking up a new recipe or one of your all-time favorites. Sit back, relax, and entertain some friends. Cooking is not for everyone, but it is one of my all-time favorite things to do. Try it and you might also enjoy cooking!